Game Over
he lay there,
teeth barred, body twitching
eyes fierce, already fading
"mommy, I see long whiskers on the counter, it's smiling - I think its a rat.."
gums rolled back in a wicked sneer
more like a rabbit - the rat was huge!
a mystery, where did he come from? he looked like he fell..
outrageous - a rat on our kitchen counter
Game over!
written together as therapy :-) by myself and my 10 year old daughter
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True story, ey!?! :) Good to see you participating in TT. I haven't done that in awhile and was just thinking I should get back into it. Great job.
ReplyDeletePS I see you're doing Vanessa's Halloween Party. So am I and you can sign up here to attend mine too...connected to hers. :) hee It's going to be so spooky!
http://bluechairdiary.blogspot.com/2010/09/official-invitation-to-harrington-manor.html
XD that kind of reminds me about me versing with the cockroach in the kitchen too, imagine three against one XDXD~ the newspaper always works =P
ReplyDeleteYikes! So big he fell through!
ReplyDeleteInteresting hit on TT. -J
Thanks for stopping by my place.
Not a game I want to play!!
ReplyDeleteOh, seriously gross. Even the description of twitching makes my skin crawl.
ReplyDeleteWow - what a riveting visual...
ReplyDeleteAnd its true?... would it make you feel better to know it happened to actress Laura Dern too? - while she was having guests, no less!
Oh my, well I'm glad you were able to get therapy!
ReplyDeleteNot sure if that is a game I want to play. Big rats...yikes!
ReplyDeletecongratulations for the game being over. A wonderful thing to share.
ReplyDeleteNope no game for me! I'd be out the door in a flash! I am not afraid of spiders but rodents give me the Willy's, or is it Ben's?
ReplyDeleteA Gourmet Rat! Arghhhhh........!
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